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From Midnight Scans: 3b6e6z

Aoi was abused by her teacher in middle school, a trauma she is still unable to overcome. One day, because of a family vacation, she is reunited with her first love, Kaoru: even though she has never forgotten him, she definitely doesn't want him to see how much she's changed...!

Type

Manga

Related Series

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Associated Names

Fallen Angel

โซ่รักพันธนาการใจ

とべない鳥

不會飛的鳥

无法飞翔的鸟

Groups Scanlating

Chibi Manga

Eclipse Scans

Midnight Scans

Latest Release(s)

v.1 c.5 by Chibi Manga 14 years ago

v.1 c.4 by Chibi Manga 14 years ago

v.1 c.1-3 + Extras 1-2 (end) by Midnight Scans 15 years ago

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Status in Country of Origin

1 Volume (Complete)

Completely Scanlated?

Yes

Anime Start/End Chapter

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Rating

Average: 6.6 / 10.0 (175 votes)

Bayesian Average: 6.55 / 10.0

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Last Updated

February 1st, 2022 6:27pm PST - 3 years ago

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Author(s)

MITSUHA Yuu

Artist(s)

MITSUHA Yuu

Year

2008

Original Publisher

Shogakukan

Serialized In (magazine)

Betsucomi (Shogakukan)

Licensed (in English)

English Publisher

N/A

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Year Pos #7757 (No change)

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On 306 reading lists

On 283 wish lists

On 858 completed lists

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Boring

by Kinky-Chan
13 years ago

Rating: 5.0 / 10.0

Art is nice, story is boring, character isn't that well developed, and what's with the one shot?! the girl keeps crying whenever she sees that yagi person. goodness! I won't recommend this manga, since the story isn't that interesting.

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I'm confused

by xox-l-emo-n-xox
13 years ago

Rating: N/A

The plot sucked, very very rushed. Not very realistic (although it is a work of fiction).
but i will give it bonus marks for being successfully cheesy. (Y)

was she pregnant? did she abort? i will never know...

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Cute

by makakalee
14 years ago

Rating: 9.0 / 10.0

I actually found this story really sweet, maybe it's because I like those cliche kind of stories but I still liked the story. 😀

I do agree though though....the author could of dragged this out to make it better...get a little more into the story and more of the couple but for a short manga I still loved it.

Not to mention that the art is just gorgeous

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by TheAlmighty
14 years ago

Rating: N/A

too dramatic to get you really into the story. the whole way through I was just like 'oh..ok this happened...ah now this....hm...i see.' I am a fair person as long as the story is gripping and actually lets me feel the pace of the plotline, i consider it alright. This one did none of that. I had the urge to laugh at the author's way of choosing how to move things along. seriously, drama does not compensate character building, but just development, but the characters themselves were just too bland and one dimensional.

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........ -puke-

by countingwounds
14 years ago

Rating: 2.5 / 10.0

okay, maybe that is a little harsh. .. but it was like one of those accidents you just can't look away from. i had NO attachment to the characters. any of them.

seriously, i wanted the girl to jump off the building. and die. ...... okay that was really probably too harsh. .. maybe. BUT SHE PROBABLY WOULD HAVE GOT CONVENIENTLY SAVED BY THE CANVAS COVERED TRUCK THAT HAPPENED TO BE RIGHT THERE.

oh man. this was just so.. bad..... i guess it had potential buried in there, but everything was so dramatic and rushed like everyone else said. it was like a terrible soap opera. ugh.

don't read this unless you're tired of mediocre stories and want to read a terrible one. .. or you reallyyyy like this kind of thing. :/

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Poorly Written

by Eddieasaur
15 years ago

Rating: 2.0 / 10.0

Character Development - Poor
Plot Development - Poor
Background Story - Poor
This story was too rushed. All the "need-to-know" information in this story comes at you in a very unorganized and speedy manner. The characters automatically have a thing for each other, although they're 'childhood friends' its been a number of years and I don't care who the person is, after that amount of time you're not still hung up over a person like that. The lead male loves the lead female, and we're shown that way too soon in the story. Her past is also revealed suddenly, which makes me wonder how on earth they could even continue the story since they've pretty much put what should be the climax at the beginning. I wasn't impressed.

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not really

by sailorliones
15 years ago

Rating: N/A

Although I was looking forward to reading this one, it seems too rushed. Everything comes out at once throwing away the realism factor. Don't know exactly what makes me think it's not realistic, but it isn't. I wanted to read this one as the plot seemed awesome and the art cool, but don't think I'll finish it.

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loving it

by xdeLiiRiOus
15 years ago

Rating: N/A

I'm loving it so far. the art is beautiful and I love both characters but fell in love with kaoru hahah

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